Okay, you begged...I watched. Overall impression is that you have a quirky kind of Ferris Bueller meets Moonlighting (the TV show) kind of tongue-n-cheek film here. Positives: The snappy editing, sound effects and things that pop in like the "Bitch" neon sign were very funny. Your vignette shots and cut-aways were very well-composed and interesting. The shots of the girls' reaction to his nose...funny. Negatives: The opening voice over was annoying. You ramble on about the beginning, middle and end far too much. It just wasn't that funny in the grand scheme of things. If you cut that in half, it might play better. Once, at Prudence's door, you broke the "180 rule" and crossed the line. She looks camera right and so does he. So they are not looking at each other. He should have been looking camera left. Easier to flip his image since nothing but night sky is behind him. If you shot film, you can reverse the neg but if you shot video, you'll have to ask Capt. Stubby how to do that effect. All in all, I found this little film quirky and entertaining - more so if you cut down the opening and tighten up a few longer sequences. The overall feeling is that it seems a bit long. Good job - Keep creating!

Ummmm, so an animated neon sign popping into frame and pointing at a woman with the word "bitch" isn't supposed to be funny? I laughed out loud at that point. I'm not sure what your angle is, but I thought it was fun on the level of "Ferris Bueller's Day Off." Your reaction that it's 'not supposed to be funny' is either a ploy to generate more interest or some way to be contrapuntal. (shrugs) It was obviously made to be funny - c'mon! In either case, I liked this film and that should be the bottom line.

The film was odd, random. You seem odd, random. I like that. Can't say anything that Muddy hasn't said.

The movie was very good as is all your other stuff. keep it up.